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Saturday, October 1, 2016

Romani Poem Translated by A Z Foreman

Poems Found In Translation: “Rasim Sejdić: Their Boots Crushed the Gypsy Violin (From Romani)”

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Posted: 29 Sep 2016 06:45 PM PDT
Jasenovac, mentioned twice in this poem, was an extermination camp. Run by the Croatian UstaÅ¡e with the material support of the Third Reich, and later dubbed "the Auschwitz of the Balkans" it was one of the largest and most sadistically administrated of all death camps. Inmates consisted of ethnic Serbs, Roma, Jews, Bosnian and Croat Muslims and anti-fascist dissidents. Approximately 45–52,000 Serbs, 15-20,000 Roma, 12-25,000 Jews, and 5-12,000 Muslims were murdered in Jasenovac.
Roma taken to the camp did not undergo selection, but were kept in open air in subsection III-C, before being brought to the killing-grounds of Gradina and Ustice for liquidation interspersed with forced labor. There the UstaÅ¡e did not use anything so mercifully quick as bullets, or gas chambers. They enjoyed killing too much for that, and savored the sport, excitement and variety of using knives, mallets, pick-axes, saws and other implements to dismember, bludgeon, exsanguinate, and behead their victims. There were even regular contests to see who could kill the most prisoners in a given span of time or with a particular weapon. In 1942, for example, Lt. Petar Brzica won a gold watch for successfully killing 1360 prisoners in just a few hours using only a small curve-bladed knife.
It may seem I am dwelling overmuch on the minutia of the horror and perversion of humanity that was Jasenovac. But there is a reason. I want any and every reader who has never before heard the name "Jasenovac" to have it seared into their brain when they come away from this page.

There are two different Romani texts of this poem. One, the first given here, seems to represent the poet's actual dialect. The other uses the metaphonological supradialectal orthography promoted by the International Romani Union, the so-called "Warsaw Alphabet" developed by Cotiarde in the 80s.  This second version also has much of the Slavic loan vocabulary and morphology replaced by Indic-derived equivalents (even the word oblako "cloud, heavens" which is an extremely old  borrowing, is replaced) along with other differences that change the sense of the poem a bit, and give the impression of being puristically motivated.
I gave priority to the more dialectal and less sanitized version, which I not only thought was a better poem all round but also seemed to me much more in keeping with Sejdić's attitude toward orality in poetic language. (This is not to say I didn't at all take the other version into account in my translation decisions, but I take it to be secondary.)

Their Boots Crushed The Gypsy Violin
By Rasim Sejdić
Translated by A.Z. Foreman

Their boots crushed the Gypsy violin
all that remains is Gypsies' ash
the fire the smoke 
rise heavenward.

They carted away the Roma
children they ripped from mothers
wives from husbands
they carted away the Roma.

Jasenovac â€” packed with Roma
tied to cement pillars they can't budge
their hands and feet in heavy shackles
down to their knees in mud and sludge.

There in Jasenovac remain
their bones as witness
to indict the works of inhumanity

Dawn breaks anew, the sun 
warming the Roma as it has always done. 

The Original:

Gazisarde Romengi Violina
Rasim Sejdić

Gazisarde romengi violina
ačile ognjište romane
e jag o dimo
ando oblako vazdinjalo.

Idžarde e Romen
čavoren restavisarde pe datar
e romnjen pe romendar
idžarde e Romen.

Jasenovco perdo Roma
pangle pala betonse stubujra
pale lantsujra pe prne pe va
ando balto dzi ke cang.

Ačile ando Jasenovco
lenge kokala
te pricin, o nemanušengim djelima
zora vedro osvanisarda
i Romen o kam pre tatarda.

The Other Original:

Uśtavde e Rromenqi Violina
Rasim Sejdić

Uśtavde e Rromenqi violina
aćhile e jaga rromane
i jag o thuv
and-o devel vazdinÇ’n.

IgÇŽrde e Rromen
ćhavorren ulavde pe daθar
e rromněn pe rromnenθar
igÇŽrde e Rromen.

Jasenovco pherdo Rroma
pandle pala betonosqe stùburǎ
verkliněnçar pe prne pe va'
and-e ćika ʒi k-e ćang

Aćhile and- Jasenovco
lenqe kokala
te mothon bimanuśikanimata
javin vèdro disàjli
ta e Rromen o kham tatÇŽrda